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apathy is harder than it looks
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11.3.04
soon stories will move forward. they have been shifting on their bases continually over the years. introductions used to be background that contributed to the buildup of action. now readers are dropped into stories in the thick of the plot in order to keep their attention. in the future stories with start at the ending and leave the readers to sort out all the details
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